Friday, May 15, 2009

Some Questions.... Comments

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If its not a poem, then it wont rhyme?
If you have no clock, do you lose time?
If you don’t talk, does that mean you lost your words?
If it flies, does it always mean it’s a bird?
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Yaritza Florencio
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Viola Grey 16 May 2009

wow, every line here flows so smoothly and gets the mind ticking overtime...a great piece of writing...love the last two lines, they're simply perfect.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

'If I separate a five and a four, is it still nine? If I give you my heart, does it prove that its mine? ' Excellent poem, I am delighted.10+++

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