Some people are obsessed with age,
they want to know the truth, no matter the wage,
but age is just a number, can't you see?
wisdom can come at any time, even at seventy-three.
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Life indeed is short, no matter one's age. Brilliant verse, Sheeya.
A meaningful and wonderful poem. So well expressed and presented. Top Marks!
So very true. Age doesn't determine your worth or skills. We must count not the years we lived but how we lived our lives.
Some of her words seem out of place, but they don't make her WHOLE poem a disgrace. I THINK Sheeya's 73, but perhaps 12 or 59 she may be. bri : )
I give 4 stars ****. There AER typos, but most of the poem is enjoyable and some of it even makes (some) sense! ! Ha ha.
Fantastic verse, Sheeya. I agree....embrace the age, no matter when one is!