Some people never leave your heart
Although they leave your door -
They linger in the loving part
And touch you to the core;
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Ten for structure, ten for the expert rhyme and ten for the sentiment. Well I guess I owe you thirty, but even using Reece Kay's vote the best I can do is 20. Danny; ¬)
Linda, I loved your poem. I can identify so well with your words. Like some people, your poem lingered with me. Thank you. Zen
Linda beautifully written.....and so true......thank you for this.... Love, D.
Linda, I loved this poem. You will never know just how right you are with this one. It is so beautifully written. I'm adding this to my favourites. Thank you so much for sharing this my friend. David
Midnight>>>A BEAUTIFUL CONFLUENCE OF PASSION & PHILOSOPHY...AND SO ELOQUENTLY DELIVERED, LASSIE! ~ F.J.R. ~
O' LInda...I love your poem...but I am one of those who like my doors locked from the inside. LOL
Beautiful sentiment in this one...lovely smooth flow as well. Nicely done Linda! Hugs. Dee