Saturday, March 17, 2007

Some People Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some people never leave your heart
Although they leave your door -
They linger in the loving part
And touch you to the core;
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Linda Ori
COMMENTS
Dee Daffodil 21 March 2007

Beautiful sentiment in this one...lovely smooth flow as well. Nicely done Linda! Hugs. Dee

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Danny Reynolds 21 March 2007

Ten for structure, ten for the expert rhyme and ten for the sentiment. Well I guess I owe you thirty, but even using Reece Kay's vote the best I can do is 20. Danny; ¬)

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Zen Bojczuk 17 March 2007

Linda, I loved your poem. I can identify so well with your words. Like some people, your poem lingered with me. Thank you. Zen

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gone gone 17 March 2007

Linda beautifully written.....and so true......thank you for this.... Love, D.

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David Harris 17 March 2007

Linda, I loved this poem. You will never know just how right you are with this one. It is so beautifully written. I'm adding this to my favourites. Thank you so much for sharing this my friend. David

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Midnight>>>A BEAUTIFUL CONFLUENCE OF PASSION & PHILOSOPHY...AND SO ELOQUENTLY DELIVERED, LASSIE! ~ F.J.R. ~

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Ted Sheridan 17 March 2007

O' LInda...I love your poem...but I am one of those who like my doors locked from the inside. LOL

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Declan McHenry 17 March 2007

A fine piece indeed Linda. Sagely rendered.

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