Wednesday, November 13, 2019

Some Open Up Like Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are those that potion of sorrows drink
To help others, but never once they blink.

Wipe out tears from others' life clean,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Lost love! ! ! Nursing loss as gain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

There is a form of poetry called Ghazal. This one is a variation of that form. Thanks for visiting

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2019

A thought provoking poem sir! My favorite lines: Some never mind missing out life's lead train/And love to go home nursing loss as gain' A very commendable piece of poetry......10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 November 2019

Thank you Dr swain for some heart warming words used for my work.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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