Some Open Up Like Door Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Some Open Up Like Door

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There are those that potion of sorrows drink
To help others, but never once they blink.

Wipe out tears from others' life clean,
Some roll up time, smoke away all its sin.

Those that worry for others all the more
And sail off leaving self behind at shore.

Some never mind missing out life's lead train,
And love to go home nursing loss as gain.

Ready to face every pain front and square
Fight it out to defeat grief with a dare.

Tough spending time with souls lonely at core,
But there are those that open up like door.

Worried that the flowers might come to plight,
Thorns, sincere souls, could sleep not all the night.
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Reflections | 01.04.2019|
Topic: sorrows, life, compassion, loss, pain

Wednesday, November 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,sorrows
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Lost love! ! ! Nursing loss as gain. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2019

There is a form of poetry called Ghazal. This one is a variation of that form. Thanks for visiting

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 November 2019

A thought provoking poem sir! My favorite lines: Some never mind missing out life's lead train/And love to go home nursing loss as gain' A very commendable piece of poetry......10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 November 2019

Thank you Dr swain for some heart warming words used for my work.

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Aniruddha Pathak

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Godhra - Gujarat
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