Sunday, May 24, 2015

Some Last Words Comments

Rating: 4.0

In the deepest morning of Gaia's green
in the deepest yearning of all unseen
there lies a harsh mourning vast
it seems
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Tinnie Moe
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Mr. M Jamal 24 May 2015

Vivid imagery, delightful use of words and graceful execution (Though I felt a little Welsh touch in the poem, you know what word you have used) ................10/10 :)

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Tinnie Moe 25 May 2015

Dear Mr. Jamal, I'm delighted to hear you know it. it's the most powerful word on the earth. It describes some kind of consternation, but filled with emotion. While consternation describes a situation merely as it is, hireath bares emotion in that situation. And sometimes, that's all we have left. Just plain thàt.

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