Saturday, June 22, 2013

Some Kisses Give Pain For Eternity Comments

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Days are spending in the mighty arms of the fear
though, the matter is so grave, i must have to appear,
and, tell the world, taking a sip of tea, my intention,
the words i wrote, now in fire, in fire as i gave me tension.
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Vishal Sharma
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Shah Jehan Ashrafi 06 September 2013

emotionally different and the theme too flows..good write

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Captain Cur 27 June 2013

A poem for posterity. The burning of your words could be literal or a symbolic fire, but the feeling and the pain are apparent. Good title and close to your poem.

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Sandra Kelley 24 June 2013

the truth is amazingly spoken

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Survi Sharma 23 June 2013

yeah, thats true i appreciate your words

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Poetheart Morgan 22 June 2013

Just hold on, like you are and with all your words. A grim kiss is not forever. All changes! ! ! Strong and belíssimo Poet! ! ! !

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David Wood 22 June 2013

A nice poem Vishal. Keep up the good work.

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Sekharan Pookkat 22 June 2013

Any thing out of place is dust- It gives us pain Your songs are beautiful Vishal.Make a strong decision about your future and proceed-My best wishes

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Gajanan Mishra 22 June 2013

test of love, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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