Tuesday, May 28, 2024

Some Issues, Are Rooted Deep. Comments

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He was my first, never felt thrill like that again.
Struck him three times, then strangled him, in my defense
He was almost 19, June 18, name Steven
I'm sorry mother, please the news don't you believe in.
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Kevin Cui
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4) please read my poem " Not Everybody Has Got An Axe To Grind" also, highlighting this very ‘issue'

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My poems (1) Again 02 and (2) Again 03

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2) I have addressed this issue in at least two of my poems shared on ph. Well done dear poet. But, we poets can do little to make families work. But, the State has to step in at the right time, right manner

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A very relevant issue treated with ample forthrightness. Failed families and disturbed or abused childhood often creates distorted personalities. Dahmer is one such case. There are many more

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D.N. Rebb 29 May 2024

I'm too afraid to give this a rating. I had no idea what it was about until I read your notes (then it all made sense) still creepy nevertheless

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Kevin Cui 01 June 2024

Hey, I wrote this poem for a class project, we're learning about poems, and Idk I just made this about Jeffrey Dahmer, I'm 13 years old, and didn't have any creepy intentions making this poem. Could you give me your thoughts about this poem? - Kevin

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Kevin Cui 03 June 2024

I'm 13 dawg

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