...Some Inconsistent Thoughts Comments

dear sarvesh.....i can read your inconsistent thoughts over and over, and not get tiredeach stanza beautifully projected, as seperate moods of one sarvesh! this one is going down in my favourites.......ritty

I am so impressed with how well you express yourself. Favourite lines were: 'the seamless canvas of life and being, utters a tribute, to the unsuspecting universe, and the abstract that fills the concrete, flashes its poetry in the agonies of existence.' Will add this one to my favs. -thanks, roshni.

Life is beautiful and your poem too.Thanks for your comment on my poem.

a playful bud inocently smiles its birth in the courtyard. i love these lines, beautiful, thanks

Consistency of good quality writing in -.... some inconsistent thoughts. Great! ! Keep it up. Thanks

An excellent write, it captures the beauty of the universe....and mind of man....a poetry in motion! ! ! ! ! !

draped in words, a thought forms poetry, disrobed, a consciousness. a great thought far beyond your age!