Friday, February 7, 2014

Some Emotions Comments

Rating: 5.0

Happiness dances in with fanfare but swiftly tiptoes away
Sadness seems to drop anchor with the sole intention to stay
Pleasure is like an instant ‘Coco Cola’ or a ‘Thumps Up’
While pain is a bitter pill that we are forced to pop up.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Salini Nair 13 February 2014

i like this poem and its fantastic presentation....

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Valsa George 10 February 2014

Beautiful poem... profound and neatly rhyming! ! 'Disgust is like an undigested thing that we throw up as something base Anticipation is like going on a date with dreams that we fondly weave.' I like these two lines the most! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 February 2014

A Wonderful poem...Quiet interesting to read..... Anticipation is like going on a first date with dreams that we fondly weave. ‘Thumps Up’ for this lovely poem. Loved reading each fantastic lines.

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