Saturday, June 6, 2009

'Some Days The Poetry Races...' Comments

Rating: 2.7

Some days the poetry
Races out of me
Like buckshot.
The day strikes,
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Lillian Susan Thomas
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Sally Carter 07 June 2009

Fantastic imagery Lillian. I can almost see the words firing in all directions. I hope to experience more of those buckshot moments in my own writing!

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Susan Jarvis 06 June 2009

Your poem breathes such verve into the 'docile herd' - this flock of fun phrases soars far beyond those mediocre murmurings. Thoroughly enjoyable, and oh so true! S ;)

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Barbara Terry 06 June 2009

This is a very good description of how the words we write come to us. Poetry is just that; a flash of lightning and if we don't write it down right away, it seems to leave forever. Thank you for sharing this with us. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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