Sunday, March 9, 2014

Some Day From Another Planet Comments

Rating: 5.0

A baby was pulling the shirt of her dad,
He picked her up lovingly within his lap.
Baby asked eagerly with her finger showing in sky
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Roseann Shawiak 16 May 2014

A baby with eternal questions for a father. A vividly stark reality of what is going on in our world today, With all the gifts at our hands, we choose instead greed - very apt description of people today. Those greedy are ready to destroy everyone and everything so they can have a treasure to call their own. Very selfish, egotistical people leading us all to destruction of our earth.

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Ramesh Rai 13 March 2014

This fireball is that planet what is burning there. Everything was there with them But the greed has wiped them out. beautiful creation. loved reading

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Rubab Atwal 10 March 2014

a beautiful poem...loved reading it..vividly described...

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Patricia Grantham 09 March 2014

Such a vivid description of the earth and how it is being disrupted by humans. Much disrespect for others and selfish greed. Will we survive it all? Like it.

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Kanav Justa 09 March 2014

.. our dark side weighs more than our good side... humans though intellegent are the most dumbest beings... despite knowing what is right.. they do bad... nice poem...

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