Monday, May 4, 2009
Some Day Comments
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In the begining it was great
Our love was strong, it could never die
In the end, it was fate
Our love was gone, it was just a lie
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Gillian.E. Shaw
04 May 2009
Liked this - read the first two lines thought oh no... then the second two lines cleverly held me through to the end. There is skill here.
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7/23/2025 6:55:51 PM # 1.0.0
lies will bring pain and death to an important part of a being- their HEART! nice poem.. hurt a little to read it ur friend Bella