Sunday, November 29, 2020

Some Bonds Are Just Formed... Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tiny little drops of rain
Weave the necklace of elegant pearl
As they meter their journey down
But the wind around can't whirl
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Varsha M
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Chinedu Dike 01 December 2020

An insightful piece nicely put together...

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Rajnish Manga 01 December 2020

I love the fascinating images created by the poet which transform a normal rain-soaked scene into a pageantry. Thank you so much.

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Indira Renganathan 30 November 2020

'wind and rain unite as one'... interesting expression...a beautiful poem..5 stars

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Dr Dillip K Swain 30 November 2020

For wind and rain unite as one....wonderful poetic expression! A beautiful poem.

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Martin Greyford 30 November 2020

But the wind around can't whirl Without her consent to be blown So embraced her in arms full Until hands fail to set horizon Beautiful and very sensational.10++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 November 2020

A well executed poem....... Truly fascinating and fantastic.......5 stars*****

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Kostas Lagos 29 November 2020

One of your best poems Varsha! To my list

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Anil Kumar Panda 29 November 2020

A very nice write. Loved it. Nice share.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 November 2020

Temple of wind on the rule

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