Sunday, April 19, 2009

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Rating: 3.2

Controlled by ego, driven by want,
dogged by desire, blinded by guile,
fail to see most of life’s attractions,
Unseen natures, beauty, charm, style,
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Bob Blackwell
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Shashendra Amalshan 26 May 2009

Nice verse indeed..this poem makes the reader think..arouses the reader's mind's eye..thanks for the words of wisdom 10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 May 2009

'Have no time to gaze, no time to stare, ' Nice poem, love with 10.

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Meggie Gultiano 03 May 2009

Great work, ..love this

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u are a fountain of emotion and thought..amazing! ! brilliant work sir

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Mamta Agarwal 02 May 2009

eyes but no vision, heart that cannot feel, greed that has no end. lovely message. Nature is so eloquent in its silenceand sounds, but we have no time to stand and hear its messages or enjoy the beauty.10+ Mamta

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~ Jon London ~ 02 May 2009

So many of us fail to see the colours painted by Gods hands, but you my friend, have reminded us to what we could be missing, great work Bob 10++

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Sandra Fowler 01 May 2009

All aspects of nature speak eloquently of the Creator's handiwork. But some are blind to the beauty that is so freely offered to them. Your message is beautiful, timely, and much appreciated by this reader. Always your friend, Sandra

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a true write from the heart...men have become so full of themselves their tiny selves the big side of us we ignore...an inspiring write

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 April 2009

yes our life has become so artificial, we have forgot to take pleasure in natural things.......Good Write........

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C. P. Sharma 26 April 2009

I am reminded of Wordsworth's lament: Getting and spending we lay wasre our powers, Little we see in Nature that is ours, We have given our heart away a sordid boon. CP

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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009

true words honestly spoken out...the world in general fails to see the beauty and feel the comfort and peace that the nature offers...great work well composed...10

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Fay Slimm 19 April 2009

Very true the statements in this piece Bob - - if we never have time to 'stand and stare' and see all the bounty of nature we are not really living as your verse brings to our attention..... thank you a 10 from Fay....

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Ian Bowen 19 April 2009

Bob, nice piece of work,10/10 Ian

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