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"Some poem! " I like that. For me, rhyme is hard work. I never seems to cone easy. Thank you for reading it.
It all adds up to balance. Some condense, some drag out. This is a celebration of pared-down language.
Simpler would be: Some condense // Some expand. It's sort of Yin / Yang opposites that balance. Thank you for reading it.
Thank you. I try to keep things simple. Add humour if I can. Sometimes I get it right…sometimes I don't. I appreciate your feed back.
Yes, life is a mixture of different hues...Some are beautiful, some are ugly....We remember what is beautiful and try to forget ugly.
Very true. Unfortunately, some of the ugly things do get forgotten and then repeated. Thank you for your feedback.
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7/26/2025 12:59:31 AM # 1.0.0
Jim, I plan to put this poem into my June 2023 Showcase of PH poems I share with members. bri ;)