Tuesday, January 10, 2023

Some Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some do
Some don't
Some will
Some won't
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Jim McGill
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Bri Edwards 15 June 2023

Jim, I plan to put this poem into my June 2023 Showcase of PH poems I share with members. bri ;)

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Kim Barney 12 June 2023

Some poem! Cute rhymes, some times.

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Jim McGill 12 June 2023

"Some poem! " I like that. For me, rhyme is hard work. I never seems to cone easy. Thank you for reading it.

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Denis Mair 12 June 2023

It all adds up to balance. Some condense, some drag out. This is a celebration of pared-down language.

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Jim McGill 12 June 2023

Simpler would be: Some condense // Some expand. It's sort of Yin / Yang opposites that balance. Thank you for reading it.

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Bri Edwards 12 June 2023

I like 'simplified'. five stars. : ) bri

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Jim McGill 12 June 2023

I have a single digit IQ. That's why it's simple. Thank you.

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Jim McGill 15 June 2023

‘Simplified' results from a single digit IQ. Thank you Bri

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Rob Lamberton 15 January 2023

That just about sums it up! A cute and witty write.

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Jim McGill 16 January 2023

Thank you. I try to keep things simple. Add humour if I can. Sometimes I get it right…sometimes I don't. I appreciate your feed back.

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Bharati Nayak 13 January 2023

Yes, life is a mixture of different hues...Some are beautiful, some are ugly....We remember what is beautiful and try to forget ugly.

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Jim McGill 13 January 2023

Very true. Unfortunately, some of the ugly things do get forgotten and then repeated. Thank you for your feedback.

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