Friday, February 10, 2006

Sombre Mood Comments

Rating: ★4.7

Inky blackness shrouds the sky
The world is painted gray
And in the night
The moon a scythe
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Tan Pratonix
purple Loneliness
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Gina Onyemaechi 10 February 2006

Dark, gloomy, and unsettling. 'Sombre' is putting it mildly! Love the 'inky blackness' opening. I offer 8 marks for this work. Regards, Gina.

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David Darbyshire 10 February 2006

Fine read Tan, Good one Dave

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***** ********* 10 February 2006

I know the sombre mood well Tan, thank the lord dawn is so refreshing. 10 from Tai

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