Monday, June 15, 2009

Somber Shower Comments

Rating: 5.0

im nude in the bath
sitting here, while unde the shower
as i cry, yet laugh
you got such amazing power
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krissi b'williams
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Eyan Desir 18 June 2009

Well crafted I enjoyed every words beautifully painted on the screen

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oh that ending was touching till i felt a heart ache..touching one...10+++++..will read more dear one

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Allan Macli Borges 15 June 2009

good writing... shows the anguish and sorrow that requires loneliness... a hot bath can help so much.. but the sadness will always be there... be strong! !

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