Thursday, May 6, 2010

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Rating: 5.0

I am falling into an never ending hole of my mistakes
I am suffocating in this black lake
What more can be taken away?
Someone end my nightmare, my nights and days
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fjhghjo ddhhjj 10 May 2010

Very good, and I'll tell you this, I've been raised to keep a hard mind not being able to show any emotions but some things you said, I've felt before

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Dallas Voyles 10 May 2010

ur poem was very good, and idk if u'll believe me but ive felt like that for a long time before, i went crazy in my head trying to hide all the feelings ive felt

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Konstantin Filipov 06 May 2010

A very gloomy and sad poem. Thumbs up!

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