Sunday, March 8, 2009

Soltitude Of Life Comments

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My soul searched for my body
During birth, they mingled as one
During life, they were inseparable
During death, they singled out as two
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Lakshmi Venkataraman
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an amasing start...the soul is a very close friend

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Swagathnath Rajeswari 22 March 2009

Oh Sister! poem comes from heart. Your poem must not show depressed, yet you have put in good words and well penned. I like the poem very much and not if it is written from your mind. My full marks go to the poem 10+++++

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Shekhar Joshi 11 March 2009

be optimistic and believe in yourself that's all and you will see the clouds scattering away. good work

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