Solomon's Wisdom Comments

HI, I think we both drank From the self same source spring I wrote, 'A Pessimistic View of Life' In my college days decades two before But, refreshing still was it for me To feel the breeze brush my face again A remembrance of sorts it stirred To read it embellished with gold From the Quill in Hitesh's hand! Your's is the best as always, Dear friend, you are a master weaver With gold and silver thread You create a beautiful tapestry Which no one else can hold compare! Pls read my 'A Pessimistic View of Life' when time permits.

The final four lines strike at the heart - a deep and powerful write. To every thing there is a reason, and a time to every purpose under the heaven....

Simplicity and naturalness in these lines, reminding somehow of the song 'Dust in the wind' but with its own strong flavour. Thanks for sharing this powerful poem.

A good poem indeed, with thoughts and imagery.10

this is amazing! ! One more vote...10! ! !

Dear Dr.Hitesh, Some moments fource to us to write like this, justified creation of such moments to you, Regards,

beautiful lines.....these two lines made me admire your work more than anything.. ' Happy are those, who have died and gone; Blessed are souls that refused to born '...

the wisdom of Solomon...only God's wisdom can surpass..and scattered their wisdom so it has fallen to you and to others poets at PH too........you have expressed, shared your knowledge, wisdom and love through your works sir.....thanks for being a poet...

lovely poem! keep writing! no kings like him. he was a king as well as a prophet. he has widest kingdom ever, richest kingdom ever, and humblest heart. he rules the human being, the nature, the flora and fauna as well as the unseen creatures. I feel his most precious wisdom is to be humble to all people and to God.

sure hitesh, what you have written is mere truth... 10++++++

This is an outstanding piece of poetry. First time reading a poem I started involutarily shouting Aha, Oho! Each line is a masterpiece. I have no words to describe the greatness of this poem. Certainly this poem will stand for ever as a great masterpiece..........My 10 are tooooooooooooooo small a gift to this great poem. I am selecting this as my favourite. What a day I found this super poem? ? ? ! ! ! ! !

Wow, a great rhapsody of a peom, beautifully written, immensely enjoyable with rare insight. My 10.

Happy are those, who have died and gone; Blessed are those who are never born. Great piece by you Dr Hitesh... I loved the diversity of your thought and the skill of rhyming is really wonderful... I tried to write something in rhyming about this poem, but couldn't... :) Regards, Kamran

i had to read this poem twice to understand it but great poem

Although I do not agree with the poet on this issue, I must admit it's a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing!

Superbly penned with rhyme, rhythm and music of its own. But for all these, life goes on, It's a puzzle unresolved It's not conclusions foregone.

A deep poem..mind provoking..and really true! If only those were not happening..replace those by love and care... Great poem!

i think everything is worth while if done with love and care. try it, you will not be disappointment. where there is hope there is life.

wow...................well done....a master piece.........how true how true are the words u speak................10!