Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Solo Dove Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes meet his
From across the room
Thoughts of the two of us
Fill me soon
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Brianna Trombley
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Justin Unanue 24 January 2010

Great write... nice, just great. Unrequited love is something I can relate with. Good stuff.

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Keith Hendrickson 05 January 2009

very deep. i like the way you flow on this. cant wait to read more

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Kimber Harrison 07 December 2008

Another great write!

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Kesav Easwaran 03 December 2008

a dove in love satisfied in fantasy alone...an artful write with in a romantic outer frame, Brianna...good work...10

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Brianna Trombley

Brianna Trombley

Michigan
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