Friday, March 15, 2013

Solitude - (Almost) - Aka Sitting In A Dusk-Filled Room.... [relaxation; Quiet; Thinking] Comments

Rating: 5.0

With eyes closed and my hands folded up on my lap,
I'm about as close as I ever come to taking a nap.
I might fall asleep but for the continuous tap.... tap, tap, tap,
as, with her delicate fingers, my wife, on her keyboard, does rap.
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Bri Edwards
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Hazel Durham 14 March 2019

Beautiful write Bri I could feel the pleasure of peaceful solitude but with the knowledge that you are not totally alone you're in a warm house with your wife and everything familiar is so comforting!

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Simone Inez Harriman 12 September 2017

A poem that makes one feel lazy, safe and cosy, while gentle tapping notes fill the background with well-being while outside the cool wind blows.10+

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Valsa George 25 April 2013

Beautiful! ! In a dusk filled room, reclining on an arm chair and about to fall into a siesta with the tap tap sound of the key board of the piano played by your wife, is a heavenly moment! This quietitude is welcome, but when it becomes forced and permanent, it will drive anyone crazy! ! A very enjoyable read! ! Thank you for your sweet comment! !

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Vishal Sharma 18 March 2013

very nice poem...great write, , , check mine too

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 16 March 2013

Well. i feel sleepy a little..ha ha ha(just kidding) sometimes i like just to sit down and feel the relaxation. you know my uncle (my mum brother) has a big publishing company, (books, and everything) it's been three days that i am helping them in a working case. and i have slept only 18 hours...! ! ! and i come to PH from here in my resting times. i really like to take a long sleep......nice one Bri. well done

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