Monday, August 11, 2008

Solitude Comments

Rating: 4.5

i dream building a nipa hut
on the side of a hill
under a big talisay tree
and all i need is a shade
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Ayi Escalona
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Walterrean Salley 26 December 2009

The simple things in life are the weightiest: a dream, a hill, a tree, shade, space, time, thoughts.... Lovely poem.

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Estrella Baldemosa 17 March 2009

I love the imagery of solitude...fine write Ariel. Nahanaw na lagi ka.

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