Solitude Comments

excellent work...magnificent approach...10+

The wave of hair dances across The nape and spills fragrance of A fresh rose. A thought wells up In mind and silently on paper to A lover goes....... touching concluding. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

" ...Relationship Is sold to the heartless without Quoting a price." Marvelous! it speaks volumes... and the make believe world around... Thanks

This is a poem that has information that the writer can explain much better than the reader. I have not clear what is the real situation here. It seems to refer to something important or quite serious and though I get some lines, I`m lost in the middle of it all.