Monday, June 19, 2017

Solitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

Solitude

whispers
a rain drop
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John Ackerman
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Simone Inez Harriman 23 June 2017

I love the imagery. Well done. A beautiful poem...10+

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Rajnish Manga 19 June 2017

A subject devoted to making life better through proper evaluation of circumstances before taking a decision. It is better to ponder over all pros and cons. Highly thought provoking. Thanks. the absence of the good brings on the bad quick conclusions will often lead the best of us astray,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 June 2017

Being spiritually alone is truly important for one to meditate, ponder and think of the things that happen everyday... A perfect 10.... You may visit my AN EVENING MEDITATION.. Thanks, John...

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Jefferson Carter 19 June 2017

John, I have a strong feeling this would be much better if you created some vivid images to carry your message. Read some good contemporary poets like Philip Levine of Mary Oliver to be guidd and inspired. if you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC

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