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Life, gone like a passing breeze.
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Fine and lofty versa written with persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A beautiful creation Prabhakar.
The way you compared life to a passing breeze is amazing..my though went to John McGahern's Memoir, where he compared life to a flash of light in the darkness..Your poem is wonderfully written and moving.10 +++
Solitude is what we all face as our brain/ minds are encased under our craniums. Imaginative. ps change chicks to cheeks.