Saturday, August 22, 2015

Solitude Comments

Rating: 5.0

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burst out upheaval melting
all definitions.
Life, gone like a passing breeze.
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prabhakar bhatlekar
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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

Solitude is what we all face as our brain/ minds are encased under our craniums. Imaginative. ps change chicks to cheeks.

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Chinedu Dike 12 March 2018

Fine and lofty versa written with persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A beautiful creation Prabhakar.

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Agatha Eliza 21 October 2015

The way you compared life to a passing breeze is amazing..my though went to John McGahern's Memoir, where he compared life to a flash of light in the darkness..Your poem is wonderfully written and moving.10 +++

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