Monday, June 15, 2009

Solitary Walk Comments

Rating: 3.8

Alone I go
up and down
past past, present and future
in my inner thoughts
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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 June 2009

'I withdraw into my solitary path how sweet is lonely talks purity of truth never lost.' Wonderful composition 10+

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Sandra Martyres 15 June 2009

A wonderful piece Lalitha, with subtle use of metaphors for effect...I agree with you - A solitary mind is pure and true...10 from me undoubtedly

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Rakesh Bedi 15 June 2009

...... purity of truth never lost. What else to expect from a pure mind? !

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Raj Arumugam 15 June 2009

the solitary mind is pure, Lalitha...the poem alludes quite clearly to a calm state of mind, taking off quite skilfully from a concrete and credible details...

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Rory Hudson 15 June 2009

A subtle work, poetically expressed with good metaphors.

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