Saturday, November 7, 2015

Solitary Path Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I were Frost, I would walk the less-traveled path.
If I were Thoreau, I would go and live deliberately.
If I were Basho, I would travel the narrow road.
If I were Eliot, I would seek out muttering retreats.
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Suzanne Hayasaki
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Glen Kappy 01 September 2018

breadboard of my memory is a cool image, suzanne, and thematically consistent with the venue of home you've pictured. -glen

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Ratnakar Mandlik 08 November 2015

Beautiful soliloquy in the form of a verse. Serious thinking f for exploring various options for achievement of remarkable things along with minutest details of planning increase the depth of the poem while the first stanza itself takes it to a great level. Thanks for sharing.10++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2015

If I were Frost, I would walk the less-traveled path...Really very amazing expression shared here with wise love. Nicely penned..10

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Suzanne Hayasaki 07 November 2015

I really appreciate your kind words.

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Suzanne Hayasaki

Suzanne Hayasaki

Menomonee Falls, WI, USA
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