Saturday, November 21, 2009
Solitary Comfort Comments
Rating: ★0.0
Dimness clouds awareness
Concealing groping eyes
From registering any truth
That’s been smothered by it
...
Read full text
COMMENTS
Muhammed Medhat
21 November 2009
i'm sorry to say this..but this is not poetry there is no ryhme, you intended to choose hard words..so the language is not simple as its the main condition of poetry
0
0
Reply
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
8/3/2025 4:57:23 AM # 1.0.0
Poetry doesn't have to rhyme... poetry comes from a place in the heart that expresses deep awareness in the poet's mind and soul. Very nicely done and definitely deep. There are no rules in poetry... either it moves you or it doesn't.