Saturday, June 27, 2009

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Inside the morning this heart is a gong
announcing your presence.
See? This skin of mine is but a sheaf of
pale wheat, ripened to nourish another’s need.
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Val Morehouse
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June Bugg 22 July 2009

Wow. You actually have a lot of talent. The poem maintained a consistent tone, and the imagery was appropriate and well thought out. Great job with this.

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Greenwolfe 1962 27 June 2009

The only thing I can say about this is, 'It is a beautiful thing. A beautiful thing indeed.' Greenwolfe 1962

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