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Very descriptive, well written and thought out.

Very well written. These helps the reader understand that the world sometimes can be very unkind!

A rhythmic soul searching soliloquy with melting aliterations adding to its beauty. Enjoyed the read.

Indeed it is a meaningful soliloquy to muse over to feel the painful pleasure of life in the human world!

I'm sure young Hamlet would be inspired by your words. Colours, sounds and emotional highs and lows combine with nature to produce a work that transforms the reader. A beautiful piece. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Great imagination! Good Write!

Great imagery in this write, thanks for sharing it with us all, well done Lynda 10

Always going forward, I really like the elegance of your poems.....10 Peace and Love, Linda

A very Brilliant and pituresque write that brings many viisions to a readers mind... I truly enjoyed this piece my Good friend! Thank U so much for putting pen to paper and bringing us an Excellent Read! God Bless

first of all i must say you have a way with words- wordsmith. that said, while talking ourselves out of our melancholic thoughts, we do manage to find inner strength and nature is a big teacher, if we are aware and mindful. through unusual imagery, you have conveyed a powerful message and strength of chracter.10 Mamta

Very graphic Style of writting :)

The message of how life goes on is an important one to learn, and this poem describes it well. it's a great read, you've done well.

leaves swaying jingling of the mango groves birds singing lush greenery rippling breeze lovely imagery could i have asked for more +++++10 anjali

You have unambiguously articulated in amazing poetic verses what life is all about. When melancholy disappears delight comes in. We make a stand in each stumble we made, and struggle to survive the touch of defying grace. a 10/10

Graceful melancholy, subhendu...10. Tsira

Very expressive words..and encouraging one... Very deep! Fine imagery..well narrated! A marvelous poem!

very beautiful, inspiring...provoking piece.....refreshing...touches my mind and heart..piece so life- inspiring... on going on living and not losing hope inspite of falling down and discouragement...very wonderful comparison....i love this...10+++for you...and my vote...thanks for sharing..God bless you always...