Tuesday, June 2, 2015

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Come to me
like never ending pain.
I will wait till eternity.
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Satish Verma
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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2015

Wing pierced, like butterfly amidst cacti, still trying to reach your lips.

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Rajnish Manga 02 June 2015

Thanks for this amazing poem, Sir. You have elevated the status of personal pain and suffering to something the world desires and craves for. Following lines are the most poignant ones.

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