Monday, August 9, 2010

Solicited Destination Comments

Rating: ★5.0

I could not find myself
since I got lost
in the desert of life
I find better to sink
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Afzal Shauq
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Marieta Maglas 09 August 2010

A great poem and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully.

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Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ 09 August 2010

Sensual and delicate write. Nicely done! ; D

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Afzal Shauq

Afzal Shauq

Somewhere in the world of dreams
Afzal Shauq
Afzal Shauq
Somewhere in the world of dreams
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