Solemnity Comments

You certainly deserve a 10 for this poem, and so I will deliver it. There are marvelous suggestions contained in your words, good advice for all of us. I love birds and nature and believe they are a solemn testament to a higher power.

I like this it's a mental food that can lead many of us on the right track of life. Be focused on what you are doing to to succeed and avoidance accidents and temptation.

Truly, Keep your eyes a few steps ahead of you, Take note of the suffering around, Appreciate the artwork and let your thoughts roam far, Let not the charismatic preacher take you astray Never have they uttered a single misplaced tune. The lines have made me to think over and over Loved reading the poem Added to my poem list.