So damn scared
On that ledge
Jagged rocks
Flared nostrils
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Nice to hear your story and that you are a man of your word. Yes, poetry is a good way to get the Message across. Same reason that I write Richard. Well written.
WOW! Richard, I was actually in a similar many years ago and I deeply prayed to God, TO spare my life and as long as i live I will never say or do one more bad thing to ever hurt one's feelings on this precious earth we live on. I have kept my promise to this day. The power of spiritual poetry can be a REAL spiritual and code to live by. BRAVO, to you Richard for sharing this fantastic poem to many poets and people on this beautiful planet earth we live and thrive on.
It makes me happy that you have kept your word to God. I look forward to reading some of your spiritual poetry. Eva Mae, thank you for your positive response.
What a poignant and wonderful story. Indeed, an evidence of God's miracles. If we ask and pray ardently to God, He will grant our request. He is a.generous God. Happy to know, Richard that you fulfilled your promise to Him and still continuing this noble endeavor, an affirmation of your deep faith. Beautifully written.