It is the proclaim by mystic
Illegible ordain on forehead
Both sage and savage shall take
The solemn oath to let be born
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You are a great writer, my friend. Fulfill your oath and speak the truth no matter what. An encouraging write, keep it up...10+
Sandhya, I solemnly say...that...I'm still trying to figure this one out. Cheers. Subroto
Another interesting poem but I liked the other one better. Still not bad. Ruthy
just u have pictured the realily.........in simple and truthful verse I enjoyed the reading. your tone is very nice.......keep it on dear poet friend.
It is really powerful. The emotions can only be expressed in that manner. Congratulations! another 10
We shall return this world once With bare foot and with barren hands..............Good Write...........