Tuesday, September 9, 2014

Sole Witness Comments

Rating: 4.6

A week back, in my garden bloomed, a tiny flower
Neither colorful nor flashy to grab anyone's attention
The next day one more bud opened of a pale golden hue
Making it more visible, adding an iota to its attraction
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Valsa George
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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 July 2019

I am the sole witness to this passionate romance To the love struck dandy's out right advance! ....so touching and true. This is a beautiful poem on flower with lofty theme. Thanks for sharing with nice graphic

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Mohammad Skati 22 September 2014

I felt I am reading real poetry of a great poetess. True feelings and pretty emotions. Thanks.

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Bernard Snyder 19 September 2014

How wonderful this poem really is. Well'penned!

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Geetha Jayakumar 13 September 2014

Beautiful poem Valsa. Very true said, poet is the Sole Witness to the imagery created with wonderful words.. I am left with no words, only to tell.... I am the sole witness to this passionate romance To the love struck dandy's out right advance! Loved the flow of words. Loved it.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 12 September 2014

Beauty in the backyard so often missed is wonderfully captured in a melodious poem of great beauty. Thank you.

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Kee Thampi 12 September 2014

makes me to....So lovely, it can steal any one's glance by its luster.

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Daniel Brick 11 September 2014

SO LOVELY, IT CAN STEAL ANYONE'S GLANCE BY ITS LUSTER. This poem gives me faith in time to unfold the true beauty of things, all that's required of me is patience for the full luster to be revealed. How many times I have walked past a struggling plant at a conservatory, unaware of the wonder yet to be! ... I wondered how the title would fit the poem, and its appearance was a delightful turn of phrase. But, of course, by the time you reach that crucial line we readers also are witnesses. That's the purpose of your poem: to make us, who haven't been paying attention, witnesses of beauty.

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Amitava Sur 10 September 2014

A beautiful expression of the glamor and grace of those budding beauties being embraced by the dandy butterfly........ loved the detailing of it's romance.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 10 September 2014

The bashful maidens bend their heads so demure.. poetic excellence!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 10 September 2014

Simply phenomenal.....Valsa......the romance between butterfly and flowers transformed into eternity through your lovely piece of work.........great composition

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Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

The sole witness is a truthful and reliable witness and beautifully described poetic witness is upheld by this reader. A beautiful poem!

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Somanathan Iyer 09 September 2014

A nice depiction of love between butterfly and flowers in a unique way! enjoyed reading.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 09 September 2014

A beautiful poem with full of expressions of beauty and love in the character of the flower which slowly becomes in full shape by gradual growth and the butterfly naturally coming which the poet sees as kissing in such beautiful imaginations. I likes the poem and the word power for the wonderful creativity showed in this poem.

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