+sole Soul+ Comments

Witty and true...enjoyable read...thank you

No you'll not go far with out a soul..10

smooth it is...sole soul...very clever poem..thanks

This is a good one.,

It reveals your originality in playing with the words. CP

Well penned the sole sole in both... a poem with a soul.. regards sandhya

All that soul-searching will wear out your sole....so slow down..! ! Cheeers. Subroto

Seems kinda broken up into fragments? I am so used to your work reading straight through and with a smooth flow. It is almost 'choppy'. You have some good, solid thoughts and fun choices of words though! :) Deborah Cromer