Sunday, October 13, 2013

Soldier Recruiting [come On God! ].........[an Informal Recruiting Session, Overheard] Comments

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I'm sitting in a coffee house,
an outcast from my home.
I brought pen and paper,
and I'll let my mind now roam.
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Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

Things not said when trying to sell an idea and there are jobs in the army not directly involved with killing. However the soldier goes on to mention paint ball wars for practice.

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Elena Sandu 19 November 2014

I don't use to ask people to read me but if you feel like and have time please see my poem peace, lol, had to go through all of my poems to find it . It could complete your saying and it may show of how much I approve and appreciate this truthful poem. Always wondered how is it possible for the youth to be interdicted alcohool and tobaco till 21 but are allowed to hold guns and go to war much earlier? Heart broken for the poor kids, thank you for bringing awareness.

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Noreen Carden 06 November 2013

Why not indeed.Enjoyed reading this. So glad you got back into the house.

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Ramesh T A 28 October 2013

Recruiting soldier is another form of employment to earn money! It's a killing business! Your question at the end -why couldn’t PEACE, not War.......be the Daily Deal? should kindle thoughts on peace in the minds of men for good! Wish to see that day......! ! !

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Danny Draper 18 October 2013

An excellent write. Witty, cynical and insightful a perfect mix in equal measure.

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