Thursday, August 16, 2012

Soldier: Dying Declaration Comments

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When I die in a war sector,
I will be packed and mailed to my quarter,
My medals will be piped on my chest,
Tell my mother, her son did his best,
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Leslie Philibert 16 August 2012

Liked this, good poem, it might be worth looking at some of the rhymes, sector and quarter and hard and ward are a bit dodgy. but I loved the message, good work.

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