Monday, December 3, 2012

Soldier Boy Comments

Rating: 4.5

All they taught, to handle
throw and bury explosives
bomb and bullet as shirt
guns are my trouser
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Yasmin Khan 17 April 2013

War is a bad taste business that dominates the mind who are involved in it. Obsession with war with no logical reasons is just savage. You have written some very expressive lines like' bomb and bullet as shirt/ gun is my trousers.../with the anthem 'no mercy'. Well done!

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