Saturday, January 22, 2022

Soldier Boy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly I drank my diet Coke to make it last
As I waited for yr message that you were returning
And remaining until further notice
I hoped that another depolyment would never come
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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David Wood 24 January 2022

I can feel the tension, of waiting and waiting, hoping and hoping and the sadness and frustration as time passes away. this should be Poem of the Day for it's depth and quality.

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2022

A very good write which signifies your anxiety for some body dear to come from deployment of troops.Excellently crafted.

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Ruta Mohapatra 23 January 2022

So touching! The long wait for a dear one in the army...

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Anjandev Roy 23 January 2022

Magnificent write, .....brilliantly expressed...

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

this poem should be poem of the day--definitely one of the top 100--5 stars and faved this piece

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

This is a masterpiece of a poem and study of real life--every word is well-chosen and placed, every line goes deep into the human situation

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Susan Williams 23 January 2022

oh cripes, PH erased my comment for being too long--I'd like to do a too long comment on PH! ! !

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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