Wednesday, December 16, 2015

Soldier Comments

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I stood retorted
In my army uniform
My life is now sorted
I'm ready too perform
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Lee Fones
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Spock The Vegan 16 December 2015

It's nice to be prepared. I was a soldier once. I hope you don't mind a correction to your English. You used the word TOO twice, and it should have been TO. The word TOO means ALSO.

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