Monday, July 8, 2024

Solace Within Death Comments

Rating: 1.0

You are the Bringer Of Life:
The one who spreads the seeds of Mother Nature—
But when The Darkness beckons you to follow,
You must heed its call to die at last.
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Amelie Ison
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Dennis Ryan 09 July 2024

In sum, this zero poem reflects your personality and lack of character—all presumption and ego, thinking you can write about anything. Well, look at the result.

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Dennis Ryan 09 July 2024

You are about as literal-minded as they come, with no power of imagination. My expertise? Truth-telling as you know.

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Dennis Ryan 09 July 2024

You are about asminded as they come with little to no power of imagination. My expertise

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Dennis Ryan 09 July 2024

If I could rate this 0 I would … Write what you know about, Rule #1, or have the imagination to conceive, Rule #2

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