Thursday, September 20, 2012

Solace Comments

Rating: 5.0

As an only and lonely child
Now a beautiful girl
She is used to walking alone
Sitting at the edge of the woods
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Romeo Della Valle 20 September 2012

Beauty and Talent beautifully blended in this well penned and touching write! I love it! 10+++ You really got what it takes to make to the top of the Poetry World: Talent and Feelings! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City!

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Saadat Tahir 20 September 2012

Memorising the pattern of the leaves On the forest floor Saplings twist and turn Toward the nurturing light Nature and its wide open spaces Her Solace great allegory...a true nature's child. loved yer lines cheers

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