Sunday, December 6, 2009

Sojourn Here... Comments

Rating: 2.5

Later, the day transformed
Into barren core of
A pillaged bloom,
Its luminous petals
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Seema Aarella
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Indira Babbellapati 20 December 2009

that's some intense verse...

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Suzanne Hayasaki 16 December 2009

Such a sad stanza! Only to get pinned up Forever, on its morose wall Among the hoard of Many aimless stars, Deprived of recognition. It is utterly unique! In Japan they say that what you see is a reflection of your soul. You prove it by looking up at a night sky and seeing nothing but a random scattering of anonymous stars on a 'morose' wall! I applaud your ability to express an emotion so vividly!

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