Tuesday, September 8, 2009

Sojourn Comments

Rating: 3.0

Through an arduous journey,
A sojourn of seeking,
Enlightenment through the elements,
The gifts of the earth,
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Mary Louise Mann Gabumpa 11 November 2010

very nice way of testifying your being renewed... God bless

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Sanjib Das 01 October 2009

YOUR POEM IS NO DOUBT AMAZING I AM ONLY SINGING YOUR POETIC QUALITY WITH FULL OF DIGNITY

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Aziz Alkaabi 17 September 2009

It is this arduous cycle and whirl and ever continuing war of the elements where nature attempts to purify itself is, I think, what the poetess is after, telling this extended and long story eloquantly in her subtle and creative style with but few enchanting verses. Thank you for sharing this work.

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Mubeen Sadhika 17 September 2009

Truly beautiful. Nice to read.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 September 2009

Lovely and expressive. Keep writing!

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Maria C 11 September 2009

I really liked this.

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Floyd Zimmerman 08 September 2009

Your poems seem to just keep getting better.

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