Saturday, May 2, 2009

Sojourn Comments

Rating: 5.0

The music lingered soft and low.
I barely heard it play.
This was how I liked it now,
The mode I chose each day.
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GREENWOLFE 1962
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Gorgeous work with a dreamy flow, the armchair riding you back to yesteryear. Magical imagery and masterful composition Greenwolfe. Karin Anderson

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Cristy Upshaw 03 May 2009

Sighs-Your words so elegantly written, so beautifully displayed. I would love to join you in the dreamland far away. So hypnotizing, loved the imagery and the playful feel, stunning work.

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maggie murray 02 May 2009

read this four times now...and will read it again and again...Maggie

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Duh Huh 02 May 2009

Deeply touching. I am taking this one with me. Thank you for sharing.

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Saadat Tahir 02 May 2009

OMG... GW62... this is simply awesome... i would like to write a couple of lines on this...but i feel it does not allow me to no need for any more superlatives...tenner straight superb cheers

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Fay Slimm 02 May 2009

Wonderful narration and the tale has a wistful sense too - - the rhyming is perfectly thought out - - a fine piece.....10 from Fay...

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Tsira Goge 02 May 2009

Wolfey, Memoirs and reality...- very beautiful poem...you must often take a rest, on a favourite chair... that you composed such masterpieces, it is pleasant to read them ... 10. Tsira

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