Sunday, January 13, 2013

Soiled-An Acrostic Comments

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S lippery viper- gossip tellin G
E ffortlessly disguised as casual chatte R
E asily tipping the next domin O
D aggars from the mouth of a cro W
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Aria Siren
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Sandy Player 22 February 2013

Ah isnt stevie great? This reminds me of her hate acrostic. The mouth of a crow, was my favourite part. You cant go wrong if you put a black bird into a poem.

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Søren Valentine 19 January 2013

I love the last line Aria! Tis such a good picture. Overall the poem is good as well. Good job mate

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